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Do you use past-perfect in narrative to make a reference about a time before the point of narrative? Or is it better to use past simple?

Asked by: David Roberts

When should I use the past perfect?

The past perfect refers to a time earlier than before now. It is used to make it clear that one event happened before another in the past. It does not matter which event is mentioned first – the tense makes it clear which one happened first.

When and why a writer should use the past perfect tense?

When you’re talking about some point in the past and want to reference an event that happened even earlier, using the past perfect allows you to convey the sequence of the events. It’s also clearer and more specific. Consider the difference between these two sentences: We were relieved that Tootles used washable paint.

Do we use the past perfect to show that one action happened before another in the past?

We can use the past perfect to show the order of two past events. The past perfect shows the earlier action and the past simple shows the later action. When the police arrived, the thief had escaped. It doesn’t matter in which order we say the two events.

How do you use past perfect in a story?

To indicated a completed action of the past that happened before another event took place. In other words, when our story is in past tense, we use the past perfect tense to indicate a completed action of the past (i.e., before the story’s current events take place): She had eaten all the snacks in the house already.

What is the rule of past perfect tense?

Rules of Past Perfect Tense:



We make the first finished action in Past Perfect Tense and the later finished action in Past Indefinite Tense (Simple Past Tense). The conjunctions ‘before’ and ‘after’ are used. For Negative Sentences we write had + not after the subject.

What’s the difference between past simple and past perfect?

We use the simple past to say what happened in the past, often in sequential order. The past perfect expresses events and actions that occurred prior to another past action (usually expressed in the simple past). In spoken English, it is common to use only the simple past and not the past perfect.

What should you remember when writing in the past perfect tense?

Functions of the past perfect



The past perfect refers to a time earlier than before now. It is used to make it clear that one event happened before another in the past. It does not matter which event is mentioned first – the tense makes it clear which one happened first.

Which past tense is used in story writing?

Past tense is the most commonly used tense in stories. Written and oral stories are usually told in the past tense. This can make a reader more comfortable jumping in to read the story.

What tense do you use when writing about literature?

the present tense

Literary works, paintings, films, and other artistic creations are assumed to exist in an eternal present. Therefore, when you write about writers or artists as they express themselves in their work, use the present tense.

What is past perfect example?

In the case of past perfect tense, it tells us that an event happened in the past before another event in the past. For example, the sentence Daniel had left by the time Erica got to his house uses the past perfect tense to say that Daniel left his house before Erica arrived.



How do you know the past tense of a story?


Simple past tense completed action when did it happen yesterday i went to the office yesterday. Or we had coffee last week we had coffee. Last week.

How do you write a simple past tense story?

Simple past: I wrote a novel; he wrote a novel. Past progressive: I was writing a novel; he was writing a novel. Past perfect: I had written a novel; he had written a novel. Past perfect progressive: I had been writing a novel; he had been writing a novel.

What are the examples of past tense?

Examples of Past Tense

  • Bill attended the program.
  • Tom performed in the show.
  • Alice was practicing on the tennis court.
  • Jim had been there a long time ago.
  • I was waiting for my friends.
  • Peter had been cooking the meal before we reached there.
  • Alana was happy to hear the news.
  • Jeff had left the place before we reached.

Should you write a book in past or present tense?

Present tense has more “immediacy” than past tense.



Past-tense narration is of course “immediate” in a way, since the events of the characters’ past are happening in the reader’s present. But the immediacy of the present tense also allows us to convey a character’s change as it happens, not after the fact.

How do you make a sentence in past tense?

Subject + verb



When talking about the past, we need to use past tense verbs. This is the hardest part about learning and using the past tense in English. We add “-ed” to the base form of a verb to make the past tense. Sometimes, if the last letter of the verb is “e”, then we just add “-d”.



What are the examples of present perfect tense?

Examples of Present Perfect Tense

  • I have written articles on different topics.
  • He has read various kinds of books.
  • They have played football.
  • She has taken coffee.
  • He has gone to the library.
  • We have shopped in this market.
  • We have watched movies in this Cineplex.
  • You have shopped in that market.

What is perfect perfect tense?

The perfect tense or aspect (abbreviated PERF or PRF) is a verb form that indicates that an action or circumstance occurred earlier than the time under consideration, often focusing attention on the resulting state rather than on the occurrence itself. An example of a perfect construction is I have made dinner.

What is the difference between past tense and perfect tense?

Remember that the past tense and present perfect tense can both be used to talk about things that happened in the past. The only difference is that we can use a specific time with the past tense, but we cannot use a specific time with the present perfect tense.

What does perfect tense describe?

Definition of perfect tense



grammar. : a verb tense that is used to refer to an action or state that is completed at the time of speaking or at a time spoken of.

Why perfect tense is called perfect?

As to why it’s perfect, the term comes from Latin perfectus, “achieved, finished, completed”. Which is quite literally what you have done whenever you have done something.



How do we use present perfect tense in everyday life?

1: We use this tense when we want to talk about unfinished actions or states or habits that started in the past and continue to the present.



When should I use the Present Perfect Simple Tense

  1. I’ve known Karen since 1994.
  2. She’s lived in London for three years.
  3. I’ve worked here for six months.


Why do we use present perfect?

We use the present perfect to describe a recent action or ask if something has happened recently. It’s often used with words like just, already, yet, still. We often use the present perfect in this case when some action or situation has an effect on the present.