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Guidelines for writing Poems, Stories and Tales

How do you realistically create a breakup/betrayal scene?

How do you write a realistic breakup?

10 Ways To Build The Tension

  1. Allow small things about the other person to annoy your character.
  2. Let the character feel as if they are walking on eggshells around their partner.
  3. Allow them to argue about morals, ethics, politics, animals, religion.
  4. Let jealousy slip into everything.

How do you write betrayal?

Here are some tips on how to write betrayals in your story:

  1. 1) Set up the betrayal in a way that isn’t obvious.
  2. 2) Make your readers invested in your characters.
  3. 3) The betrayer needs a motivation.
  4. 4) It has to have an effect your protagonist.
  5. 5) Do some research on the craft of lying.
  6. 6) Play around with POV.

How do you get over a heartbreak and betrayal?

Beginning the recovery process

  1. Acknowledge instead of avoid. Healing often requires you to first come to terms with what happened.
  2. Practice accepting difficult emotions. Plenty of unpleasant emotions can show up in the aftermath of betrayal.
  3. Turn to others for support.
  4. Focus on what you need.


Why should my characters break up?

personal issues:



wanting different things out of the relationship (romantically, sexually) different ideas about children/ child care. neverending problems with SO’s family or friends that SO doesn’t want to lose. betrayal: cheating, lying about important issues, not having each others back.

How do you write a heartbroken scene?

6 Tips for Writing a Sad Story

  1. Tap into your own emotionality.
  2. Know the difference between sentimentality and truth.
  3. Leave room to be surprised by specific detail.
  4. Pair strong emotions with ordinary ones.
  5. Use backstories to add weight.
  6. Use sad moments to further character development.



What is the most touching breakup message?

You were my whole world and now I feel like I have nothing. It hurts me to do this, but I can’t keep seeing you. I need to find someone who loves and appreciates me, and that someone isn’t you. I know that one day you’ll look back and realize that at this moment you lost the best thing that had ever happened to you.

What is the saddest part of betrayal?

“The saddest thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies, it comes from those you trust the most.” – Author unknown.

What’s a big word for betrayal?

synonyms: double-crosser, double-dealer, traitor, two-timer. types: Judas. someone who betrays under the guise of friendship. type of: beguiler, cheat, cheater, deceiver, slicker, trickster.

What’s a good word for betrayal?

Synonyms of betrayal

  • treachery.
  • treason.
  • deception.
  • infidelity.
  • disloyalty.
  • abandonment.
  • deceit.
  • perfidy.

How do you write a breakup text?

I wanted to say that I really enjoy us chatting and I would love to see you again, but for me it would be as friends. Not sure if you would be keen for that? I feel we aren’t compatible and this relationship isn’t working for me. So I’d like to end all further communication and wish you the best in the future.

How do you write a breakup paragraph?

Start by acknowledging how great things were once, then let your ex now how you felt at the end. It’s important to show how things fell apart, so your partner is clear. Remember, this letter isn’t about blaming them, just showing what happened. Leave any anger out of it.



How do you start a breakup paragraph?

If you don’t know how to write a breakup letter, check the following:

  1. Dear (Name) You are a wonderful person with a good heart. I understand what you want from me.
  2. Dear (Name) Even though you have tried your best to make this relationship work, I have realized my mind isn’t in it.