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Past perfect in past tense narrative: When to use and when not to?

Asked by: Derek Distler

Should a narrative be written in past tense?

You can use either present or past tense for telling your stories. The present tense is often associated with literary fiction, short stories, students in writing programs and workshops, and first novels. The past tense is used in most genre novels.

When and why a writer should use the past perfect tense?

When you’re talking about some point in the past and want to reference an event that happened even earlier, using the past perfect allows you to convey the sequence of the events. It’s also clearer and more specific. Consider the difference between these two sentences: We were relieved that Tootles used washable paint.

When should I use the past perfect?

The past perfect refers to a time earlier than before now. It is used to make it clear that one event happened before another in the past. It does not matter which event is mentioned first – the tense makes it clear which one happened first.

How do you use past perfect narration?

The past perfect is used in storytelling to provide background information. Main narratives in the past are usually in the simple tense, so the past perfect can provide details of events that happened before the main narrative. Jim arrived late to the office. He found a colleague had stolen his computer.

What tense is Harry Potter written in?

Harry Potter isn’t only written in third-person limited; it slips into moments that feel more like third-person omniscient. With omniscient, the audience is watching the events unfold from an aerial view. “Omniscient” comes from a word that means “all-knowing” in Latin.

Which past tense is used in story writing?

Past tense is the most commonly used tense in stories. Written and oral stories are usually told in the past tense. This can make a reader more comfortable jumping in to read the story.

What tense do you use when writing about literature?

the present tense

Literary works, paintings, films, and other artistic creations are assumed to exist in an eternal present. Therefore, when you write about writers or artists as they express themselves in their work, use the present tense.

What tense should I use for my novel?

Past tense is by far the most common tense, whether you’re writing a fictional novel or a nonfiction newspaper article. If you can’t decide which tense you should use in your novel, you should probably write it in past tense. There are many reasons past tense is the standard for novels.

What is example of past perfect tense?

In the case of past perfect tense, it tells us that an event happened in the past before another event in the past. For example, the sentence Daniel had left by the time Erica got to his house uses the past perfect tense to say that Daniel left his house before Erica arrived.

How do you change past perfect tense to indirect speech?

Direct Indirect Speech Rules of Past Perfect



  1. The teenager said that he had pizza for lunch. The rich man said”I had 2 private jets.
  2. The rich man said that he had 2 private jets. Father said”I had passed school with 80%”
  3. Father said that he had passed school with 80% Mother said”I had not received any phone call “

Can past perfect Stand Alone?

Yes, it can. In this context, I had done my homework tells me that you finished your homework before 8 p.m.

Did not or had not?

Had not is used when referring to something that should have been done by a certain time,but had not been done. For example: The homework was set two weeks ago and she still had not done it . Did not is used to relate that something has not been done.

When should we not use had?

We don’t need to use “had” in a sentence when we’re using regular past sentence (also called simple past tense). That is, we don’t need to use “had” if we’re referring to a single event in the past.
When to not use “had”

  1. “The dog fell asleep.”
  2. “I walked to the party.”
  3. “Patrice made the reservation.”



What tense to use after did not?

‘Didn’t’ or ‘did not’ is the past tense. It is the past tense of ‘do’. Is “didn’t” used with a present tense or past tense? Neither: it’s used with the infinitive or basic verb form.

Is hadn’t had correct?

This is a past perfect tense. In a perfect tense, the head verb is always a past participle. Therefore, “I hadn’t had” is correct.

Can I say I hadnt?

Both sentences are grammatically correct. The difference is that hadn’t is is in the past tense while haven’t is in the present tense. In context, haven’t is the grammatically correct sentence. Hadn’t would not make sense as the order of events ought to be preserved.

Has had have?

Have is used with I, we, they or plural nouns in present tense. Eg : They have a swimming pool. Had is used with I, you, he, she, it , they , we and any singular or plural nouns in past tense. Eg : They had biryani in the dinner.

Can I say I haven’t had?

If on the other hand you are speaking about your current state or intentions, you should use the perfect form: In the last two weeks I haven’t had much time, so I haven’t got that quotation for you. In the last two weeks I haven’t had much time, but I expect to be able to address your question soon.



What’s the meaning of hadn t?

had not

Hadn’t is defined as a contraction of had not. An example of hadn’t is when you overeat and say, “I wish I hadn’t eaten that third slice of pie.” contraction.

Have VS had had?

What is the difference between Have Had and Had? Have had is used when we want to connect the present with the recent past in some kind of a way. Have had is in the present perfect tense. Had is the past form of the verb ‘to have’ which is also used as an auxiliary verb in the past perfect tense.

What tense is have had?

Past Perfect tense



The Past Perfect tense in English is composed of two parts: the past tense of the verb to have (had) + the past participle of the main verb.

What are the rules of past perfect tense?

To form the past perfect tense you use the past tense of the verb “to have,” which is had, and add it to the past participle of the main verb. For example: subject + had + past participle = past perfect tense.

When should we use has and have?

While the verb to have has many different meanings, its primary meaning is “to possess, own, hold for use, or contain.” Have and has indicate possession in the present tense (describing events that are currently happening). Have is used with the pronouns I, you, we, and they, while has is used with he, she, and it.